Polished Revisions


I decided to display my final paper from unit 3 because it correlates with my final research paper. This revision process wasn’t the grandest, but it helped me believe in the things that I was writing on the page. Since I’m not a strong writer, most of the papers I’ve written have been attempts to get a good grade. There wasn’t any substance off of the page until this paper. I started to believe in what I was saying, and I wanted to learn how to articulate my ideas better. In order to make this version better than the first I focused on trying to keep my paper concise by focusing on a linear idea while also organizing my paper and reinforcing my thesis throughout the pages.

My final research paper expands off of the ideas explored in Unit 3’s paper while showing the evolution of my writing and thinking.